geepers what the heck was I thinking, using areal as a type for my dialogue? And the balloons leave a little to be desired. Well I did go back on a few pages and I'm slowly but surely reworking the things I thought needed some construction. So, now, here it is.. I'm three pages done, the rest will come. I've chosen a new font, which I too think looks better. So look out for more because it is on the way.